devin wayne davisdevin wayne davis, known also by his pen name "townee," lives in and works for the state of california. he has been published in the sacramento anthology: 100 Poems, sanskrit, the locust magazine, kota press, dwan, pierian springs, perihelion, and pig iron malt.
polarisfrom a nightshirt --the sun rises over meadowview-- this sheriff is checking ... if they have id; if they rode legally; if they have a problem with authority-- whether they have chips; perhaps, planting an informant in ranks; training poor kids to routinely submit; hunting guns, knives, the bomb, wmds, a look; blocking them, using his crossing guard forearm as a gate-- border patrol, extorting drug money.
punctuation as a second language, ia dash is redundancy, prefaced-- clarification that is often misleading, or oddly contradictory; however, as a bracket--an aside, which won't be held; that can't wait--it is quite useful.
punctuation as a second language, iithe ellipsis implies a leap of logic; that what follows it is connected, somehow, by something lent, to the previous sentence. and so, those two thoughts remain disjointed; yet are compatible, without having the span ... finished
punctuation as a second language, iiisemi-colons allow one to keep on going --pontification; defecation; eliminating the need for an and. when you were a kid, everything was a part of a bigger picture; ripping pages from a drawing pad, you can just fill infinite space; and ...
punctuation as a second language, iva comma is a tale that stretches with clauses, & catches the tongue; sometimes, unintentionally, changes your meaning-- a mouse, turning into mouth. but, the truth is, i'm never sure when to use this mark; or why, since it would be better to order your words properly and, thus, avoid the condition. |
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